looking for honest opinions on this poem i wrote?
June 12, 2009
The Rose
glistening on it's soft petals, like an angels holy
kiss upon a newborns face. Petals of a
vibrate crimson color, soaking the sparkling
nectar of life within it's stem.
A fragrance like no other on earth seeping into the
world slightly, giving humans a glimpse of heavens
greatest creation. A symbol of love's power
to all man kind.
It's tale as old as time. simple as though it may
be, it's life ends shortly but it's lasting tale
written into history for all to know and tell.
Love's universal symbol, It's image crossing
all barriers.....
The rose.....
simple yet so powerful.
( i realize that the rose is an over done subject that is not what i am looking for i want an honest opinion of how the poem sounds please and thank you in advance )
wow. you should really keep on writing because you are simply excellent!
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